invitation for a film premire

I do alot of volutering when im well enough and at the moment i am involved in making a dvd about what young poeple do in the community that is positive and showing that theses yobs are in the minority and not all young people are the same. Well i dont do the filming i do most of the admin work and help if need but one of the things i have been asked to make the invitations as we are showing the short film at our local odeon cimema later this year. my boss has asked for three dirfent ideal so i done these the young people want a hollywood style and my boss wanted a simple style and the other one was just a idea i had. i used three difrent my craft studio imaged from lavander and lace the hollywood one and the finishing touched i also used my spray and shine and spray and glitter as printeed it on plan draft paper would like your comment please.

first in vite the stlye my boss wanted plan and simple

and heres the hollywood stlye one inside and out

And this is the one i was playing with front and inside

Crafters Companion Blog First Sketch Challenge

heres the sketch we had to work from

And here is my interpretation of the sketch:

This is the front

And heres the inside of the card